The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A table and the pie charts illustrate the sources and uses of the national account of Great Britain in 2017 and 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total inflow of money has increased, and its usage has
also
changed a bit.
To begin
, the table provides us with information about the 3 types of budget sources, including the state government, local taxes and others. All 3 items have grown slightly in the year 2018.
For example
, the police budget received 177.8 million British pounds in 2018 in comparison with 175.5 million British pounds in 2017. With the improvement of financial collection, totally the amount of sources has risen by about 13 million pounds. By far there are
also
differences in the financial estimate distribution between the years presented.
Firstly
, the proportion of money spent on technology has been expanded by almost half, from 8% to 14%.
This
surge in technology investment would not be possible without a decline in the salaries of government workers, as it decreased by 6% in 2018, still remaining the main financial resources` outflow, with 69% of all the money accessible.
Nevertheless
, building and transport expenses are the only
item
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which have not varied at all.
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