The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the dynamics in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing
housework
in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
In 1920, 40% of households had a washing machine. This
number kept increasing stably
over the years until it reached 72% in 2019. Followed by Rephrase
steadily
this
is the vacuum cleaner, which started lower with
30%, but Change preposition
at
then
had a significant rise between 1940 and 1960, and having
all of the population had it by 2019.
Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, what stood out the most is
the refrigerator. In 1920, not a single Wrong verb form
was
household
owns
a refrigerator. Only Wrong verb form
owned
until
1940 did 55% of Change preposition
in
the
Correct article usage
apply
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
had
refrigerators. Every Wrong verb form
have
household
eventually had a refrigerator by 2019. On the other hand
, housework
rate kept decreasing over the Correct article usage
the housework
last
decade, due to
the rise of ownership in electrical appliances. In 1920, each household
had an average of having
50 hours of Unnecessary verb
apply
housework
every week. However
, the same can not be said by 2019, as it became only 10 hours per week.
In conclusion, the increase of ownership in
electrical appliances over the Change preposition
of
last
decade affects the number of hours put by
the Change preposition
in by
household
in doing housework
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, household with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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