The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart below displays the
percentage
of government performance on the streets and
transportations
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transportation
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in 4 countries in 1990,1995,2000,2005. Overview, in 1992-1995 Portugal had the highest
percentage
of spending on
the
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infrastructure in comparison with the other 4 countries. In 2000 Italy spent nearly equally as Portugal on transportation, and the UK government
reaeched
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reached
the highest
percentage
of spending on their roads. In 2005 there was a remarkable decrease in the amount of spending in the mentioned countries except
United
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the United
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States. At the beginning of
90s
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the 90s
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, Portugal spends more than 25% but less than 30% on fixing the roadway.
However
, the
percentage
gradually fell over the years to end up at 20% in 2005.
government
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of Itali
pay
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out
in
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the 90s more than 20% on the
hayways
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hallways
, but the
percentage
fluctuated over the 4 periods from around 23% to 18%. United Kingdom's spending
percentage
did not exceed 15% , it started at 10% and gradually dropped
until
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approximately 7%, even though the peak of their payment was in 2000 at around 13%.
united
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United
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States progressively increased the
percentage
of money spent on roads from 1990 to 11% until 2005 with 15%.
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