Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that specialists have finished their programs
such
as medicine, science, engineering…etc. They should be required to work
in the same country
they trained in because some countries
invest a huge amount of money in this
training, l believe that they should have the right to choose where they live and work
because might this
be a great opportunity for them to gain valuable experiences from different countries
.
On the one hand, many countries
invest heavily in training doctors and engineers, in order to provide the best training courses for them, thus
they ensure all that investment back through requiring them to work
locally, moreover
, they offer good salaries for them. By this
condition, this
country
will have enough professionals working for them. For example
, in Japan, all doctors after finishing their training, are required to work
in the same organization they trained for almost 7 years because their government wants to be eventually sure all investments return back to the country
. However
, I believe that specialists should have the freedom to choose where they want to work
because that gives them a chance to have more experience.
On the other hand
, it is thought that it is better for professionals who did their training to decide which country
they want to work
in because they need to follow their dreams and have experiences from different countries
. For instance
, this
is why many professional doctors make choices to work
in different countries
and have different information and then
they start to build their own clinics and be successful. I believe that professionals who choose where they work
are very productive and experienced so it is better for them to choose what is suitable for them.
In conclusion, although
some countries
spend lots of money either on doctors’ or engineers’ training courses, they have the right to choose which country
they want to work
in because this
allows them to have experience and gain new knowledge from other countries
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