Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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, I believe that specialists should have the freedom to choose where they want to Linking Words
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because that gives them a chance to have more experience.
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are very productive and experienced so it is better for them to choose what is suitable for them.
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