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Band 7

This two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

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The two maps illustrate how
city
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 hospitals have developed in three years from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
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, the
city
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 hospital has been updated to include new facilities and new
road
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 access , which have replaced the same natural features. The
road
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 access on Hospital Pd Street, there six
bus
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 stops in 2007 now changed to build the
bus
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 station. The
bus
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 station on the west of Hospital Pd Street can be accessed now with a roundabout connection. To the opposite
Bus
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 station, the car park feature has been updated, from only approach for the public and staff, to entrance only staff. Currently, the public car park now has taken the place of the right
city
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 hospital. Meanwhile, the only unchanged features in
this
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 area in the
city
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 hospital, ring
road
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, and
city
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road
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, bus with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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