Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

The popularity of

museums

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and historical

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mostly

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dominated by tourists

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local people. I argue that

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might be caused by the least awareness from the local community related to their own

cultures

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.

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essay will elucidate the reasons related to

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phenomenon as well

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effective solution to

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problem. It cannot be denied that many popular tourist

destination

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would be the local

cultures

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such

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as

museums

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and historical

sites

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. The reason for

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is that many foreigners want to study the

cultures

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from

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the country they visited. As a

results

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, the number of visitors

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to

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historical

places

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will increase significantly.

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, the local community rarely visit the

museums

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or historical

sites

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.

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may be caused by the unawareness of their own

history

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and

cultures

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.

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, many of them believe that they already know and

familiar

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with the

history

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of their country. They might think that they already

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taught about

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history

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since they were kids,

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there is no need to visit

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museums

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or historical

places

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.

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,

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phenomenon cannot be ignored, since it is important to ensure that the current and future generations know their own

cultures

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and

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history

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the history

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of the country. One of the solutions that hopefully can

solved

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problem is the rising of awareness of the cultural and historical

places

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to the local people, especially young generations.

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can

be conduct

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by

explain

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the culture and

history

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by showing them

with

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apply

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the actual living proof to increase their

curiousity

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curiosity

. By introducing them by showing the actual

places

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or things related to the story, they likely will be more interested and

started

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to explore other historical

places

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as well.

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, the

decreasing

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of

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in

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local people

to visit

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visiting

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museums

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or

historial

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historical

sites

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may

be cause

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by

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ignorance of their culture.

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can be solved by introducing them

with

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to

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the

history

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along

by

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with

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showing the actual living proof to increase their interest.