Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
In the modern era, some
people
are thinking
the current period is the best one to live and others Wrong verb form
think
expected
something interesting way to liveWrong verb form
expect
.
In Change preposition
in.
this
essay, we will discuss it.
To begin
with, some people
thought
current living is Wrong verb form
think
the
good way to live because Correct article usage
a
having
a great culture, Change preposition
of having
traditional
, governments and technology. And Replace the word
traditions
also
, they are believing
thereWrong verb form
believe
a
lot of sources to live a beautiful life. Add a missing verb
are a
For instance
, people
can buy several things easily if they have more money. Additionally
, money is not always being
good to purchase. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, people
are thinking good about current
period Correct article usage
the current
as well as
Ukraine
and Russia world war Correct article usage
the Ukraine
has
fighting for the Correct pronoun usage
that has
las
three years, Correct your spelling
last
finally
, it is happening due to
immoral of the both governments. In my opinion, I would not recommend the current living is good.
On the other hand
, other kind of people
thinks be like
: scientists are developing advanced technology to research Verb problem
that
about
certain things like space research, advanced vehicles, updating machines Change preposition
apply
as well as
they are creating a digital world to live in future. For example
, there are some modification
and updates Fix the agreement mistake
modifications
will
change everything Correct pronoun usage
that will
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
was
said by Correct your spelling
as
Mr.
Martin (Ex. Pilot operation of space research Change the punctuation
Mr
center
, NASA). Change the spelling
centre
Apart from
this
, industries are developing 5.0, which means we can control and operate the production by the remote mode.
To conclude
, people
who thinks
Change the verb form
think
to live
in Change the verb form
living
current
period is not good compared to some incidents and others improving the technology to Add an article
the current
next
level for the future so I would recommend Correct article usage
the next
people
to go researching side which is really good.Submitted by saravanan.ko2011 on
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