Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

In the modern era, some

people

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are thinking

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the current period is the best one to live and others

expected

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something interesting way to live

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this

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essay, we will discuss it.

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with, some

people

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thought

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current living is

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good way to live because

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a great culture,

traditional

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, governments and technology. And

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, they

are believing

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there

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lot of sources to live a beautiful life.

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people

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can buy several things easily if they have more money.

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, money is not always

being

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good to purchase.

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people

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are thinking good about

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period

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Ukraine

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and Russia world war

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fighting for the

las

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three years,

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immoral of the both governments. In my opinion, I would not recommend the current living is good.

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, other kind of

people

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thinks

be like

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: scientists are developing advanced technology to research

about

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apply

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certain things like space research, advanced vehicles, updating machines

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they are creating a digital world to live in future.

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, there are some

modification

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and updates

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change everything

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Martin (Ex. Pilot operation of space research

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, NASA).

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, industries are developing 5.0, which means we can control and operate the production by the remote mode.

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people

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who

thinks

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to live

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current

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period is not good compared to some incidents and others improving the technology to

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the next

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level for the future so I would recommend

people

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to go researching side which is really good.

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Dec 15, 2024

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