The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates some changes in university sports courts from 1990 to nowadays.

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it is clear that

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sports facilities have been expanded and in 1990 there was no divide on both left and right sides not only the public locations like the car lawn and the forest

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been displaced. In terms of the sports magistrate, the car estate was removed and the Tennis bench was relocated from the left side to the right and it has been expanded

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alternatively the Tennis tribunal has been altered into a Fitness centre

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the playground was destroyed and a Basketball bench has been established. Regarding the remaining changes, it can be seen that the Outdoor pool was more expanded rather than these days what is more Changing room has been redistributed a little from the left side of the section is divided to the right

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it has been improved in its size.

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, there are no changes in the Cafe and the reservation place.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "divide" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below.

These days, poverty has become a serious issue around the world. What are the problems that can occur because of this issue and suggest some solutions to overcome this problem

Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earning between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People doing dangerous sporting activities like scuba-diving and bungee-jumping should be responsible for their own safety. Rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?