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Some people argue that technology has made our lives more complicated, while others believe it has simplified things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In
this
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 present time, technology has been progressively universal. It is even sometimes mandatory to make use of it
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 places.
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 some argue that it has complicated our lives, others claim that it made living much more easier compared to ancient times.
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perspectives
 and provide a
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thorough
 analysis before reconciling to a conclusion. On one hand, it is agreed by many individuals that taking advantage of innovations has brought a substantial number of old methods to an end. Notably, in order to call something an invention, it has to solve an issue,
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 it would be useless.
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, people from 500 years ago would spend months to deliver a message, when, nowadays, it would only take
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 of an eye.
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, it is apparent that technology is
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useful
.
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,
this
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 assumption is opposed by many people, as they see that inventions have only made our lives miserable.
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, people now are more likely to spend longer durations alone, delve
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 relationships, and carry out lighter movements.
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, and
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according to
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 several reports, societies now suffer
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increasingly
 from both physical and psychological diseases
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 the aforementioned factors.
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, using inventions
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 of older means
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 more problems than it
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solves
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. In the end, newer ways have many pros and cons, but it all
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 back to the person's judgment
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as to
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 when to use which. In my personal opinion, I believe that finding a better approach to do more in less time is always
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. So, I strongly agree that technology has simplified our lives.
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, I hope researchers find
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suitable
 solutions for the issues that have struck the community.
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