Some people feel that boarding schools whoare an excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides and give your opinion.

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These days
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families
tend to send
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their
kids
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excellent
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boarding
schools
for their own
reasons
, meanwhile some
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find that it is
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unnecessary
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multiple
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do not
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agree with the idea of boarding
schools
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understand both opinions for many
reasons
.
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paragraph will discuss both sides of the argument and how it can impact a child's education with examples given in each opinion. The idea of sending kids to a boarding school could be exciting for some
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families
as they believe that they will be
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receiving
a greater education opportunity, one of the
reasons
why parents think
that is
because
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demanding boarding
schools
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, which can lead students to push themselves past their limits to
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excel
in the courses they take. There is
also
another primary reason why they consider boarding
schools
. and it is
also
for how strict the rules are so that might
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guide
them to have a perfect
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lifestyle
and
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possibly
mature more than other students that are in a school different than theirs.
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when it comes to the
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disadvantages
of it there is a number of
reasons
.
For instance
, living in a new
different
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country you're not familiar with
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rules
nor
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culture just for your education
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could be quite
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challenging
for some individuals,
in addition
to
that
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how many
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children
and teens nowadays are dealing with social
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anxiety
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insecurities,
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not able to be comprehend the fact that they are on their own now, which is reasonable yet many parents or even gaurdians don't understand it.
To sum up
, as both sides of the
arguments
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are logical it depends on the
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students
themselves whether they want it or not ultimately.
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