Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However, some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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feel that free
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has to be provided by
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at every level. Others declare that university
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people
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who desire to become students. In
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era, some
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should have
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freely.
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to be provided free
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that, government can enhance the
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of human
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from
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country. By providing free
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to
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,
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in
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country will be better off to improve their careers.
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of Finland
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better than
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indonesian
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provided free
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to improve their careers. So, free
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is very essential to
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their lives become better.
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, others believe that university
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should be paid
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individuals.
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argument is
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essential because some
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desire the
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of
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that is
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better than
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who are given free
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.
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, when they must pay
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education
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at a lecture, they
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get some facilities that are better to enhance their
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of life.
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, some
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desire to pay
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education
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to get facilities that are better than
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provided free
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. In conclusion,
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the government
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must provide free
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to
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who need it because some
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want to pay
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education
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to get facilities of
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that are better.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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