Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

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technology 
people
 are able to install copyrighted 
music
 and 
books
 available on the Internet easily without spending any money.
Although
it gives 
people
 the chance to use these materials without the need to pay, I believe
this
is 
disrespect
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 to the the
work
done by the authors and 
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 them in some way. A positive aspect of having access 
copyrighted
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music
 and 
books
 is that it allows 
people
 to be able to progress.
In other words
, the individuals of society get educated when reading more and more 
books
as a result
, the
overall
level of culture is increasing among 
people
.
Furthermore
people
 can allocate their money to 
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 other areas which enables them to manage their budget effectively
while
they do not lack new tases of 
music
 and 
books
 in their life via copyrighted materials. Having said that, there are various drawbacks of enabling 
people
 
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this
type of method for the areas of art.
Firstly
, downloading them illegally affects the author in a financial way.
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that, author
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,
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author
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the author
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is seeking any profit from his
work
 and copyrighted resources
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the main source of income
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him
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.
For instance
, a writer who published a new book expects that any possible 
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 would bring him money as 
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 compensation 
of
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hard
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the hard
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work
he put into it,
while
individuals try to download it illegally without spending any charge.
In addition
, some 
people
 can use these materials for plagiarism by changing their contents with small differences. It is another disadvantageous side of having copyrighted 
music
 and 
books
 on 
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for free. In conclusion, I think that authors'
work
should be appreciated and respected and shouldn't be available for free,
although
it has some beneficial sides for society with regard to improvements in
culture
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 level and financial situations.
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