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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

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 technology 
people
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 are able to install copyrighted 
music
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 and 
books
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 available on the Internet easily without spending any money.
Although
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 it gives 
people
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 the chance to use these materials without the need to pay, I believe
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 is 
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 to the the
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 done by the authors and 
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 them in some way. A positive aspect of having access 
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music
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 and 
books
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 is that it allows 
people
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 to be able to progress.
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, the individuals of society get educated when reading more and more 
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, 
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, the
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 level of culture is increasing among 
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.
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, 
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 can allocate their money to 
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 other areas which enables them to manage their budget effectively
while
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 they do not lack new tases of 
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 and 
books
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 in their life via copyrighted materials. Having said that, there are various drawbacks of enabling 
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this
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 type of method for the areas of art.
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, downloading them illegally affects the author in a financial way.
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that, author
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,
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author
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the author
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 is seeking any profit from his
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 and copyrighted resources
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 the main source of income
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him
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.
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, a writer who published a new book expects that any possible 
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 would bring him money as 
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 compensation 
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hard
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work
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 he put into it,
while
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 individuals try to download it illegally without spending any charge.
In addition
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, some 
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 can use these materials for plagiarism by changing their contents with small differences. It is another disadvantageous side of having copyrighted 
music
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 and 
books
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 on 
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 for free. In conclusion, I think that authors'
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 should be appreciated and respected and shouldn't be available for free,
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 it has some beneficial sides for society with regard to improvements in
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 level and financial situations.
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