Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As we know, bringing up a
child
is very complex since parents should be aware of the values which
pass Correct pronoun usage
that they
to
their Change preposition
on to
children
. Moreover
, some people believe giving children
freedom
of choice in their daily matters
will lead to people who only think about their own selves. However
, there are others who believe having this
freedom
of choice is important for a child
. In this
essay, I will discuss both perspectives and present my own opinion.
On the one hand, giving children
space to make decisions
about their own daily matters
is important. By giving this
freedom
, children
will learn to be independent. Since,
learning Remove the comma
apply
this
charecterestic
can help them as Correct your spelling
characteristic
a
adult to overcome some problems. Change the article
an
For example
, in some cultures when the children
turn to
18, they should earn Change preposition
apply
they
own money and move out from their parent's house Correct pronoun usage
their
thus
learning to be independent as a child
will make this
journey easier. It furthermore
can teach them to be responsible for their own choices and accept their mistakes.
On the other hand
, some people disagree with the first group and they believe this
freedom
can lead to a selfish person. This
can happen when parents do not make any restrictions for the child
. If a child
can choose and decide in every matters
without any restrictions, Change to a singular noun
matter
this
child
will become a
illusional person who thinks everything should be how she/he wants. Change the article
an
In addition
, this
can lead to the consumerisem
. Correct your spelling
consumerism
consumers
In other words
, by being able to make decisions
in every matters
and having no Change to a singular noun
matter
bonderies
, the youth never Correct your spelling
boundaries
undrestand
the value of money and the hardworking behind the process of earning that ,so as an Correct your spelling
understand
adult
they will experience difficulties.
Add a comma
adult,
To conclude
, making decisions
on all the daily matters
by
a Change preposition
of
child
can cause many difficulties in their adulthood. I believe children
should not be able to make all decisions
by
their ownChange preposition
on
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