Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the advancement of technology, lately

numerours

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numerous

harmful

content

has been

spread

on the

internet

. Not a few

people

argue that the only solution to handle

this

issue is for the

government

to

control

by

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censoring the

content

of websites. I concur with the opinion since the

government

have the authority to

control

the

content

that

spread

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spreads

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among the

citizen

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citizens

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on the

internet

. It cannot be denied that the harmful

content

on the

internet

has

increase

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increased

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significantly over the years. If the

government

could not

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cannot

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handle it immediately,

this

definitely will

give

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a negative influence

to

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on

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the

people

, especially

young

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generations. Nowadays, many young

generation

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generations

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already

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are already

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being exposed

by

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to

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the

internet

. We cannot

control

other

people

on what

content

they prefer to watch daily.

Therefore

, if numerous

people

getting

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exposed

by

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to

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the harmful

content

, it is either will

bothering

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bother

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them or influence them to do what they see on the

internet

. As mentioned earlier, if individuals get the idea to do the harmful act after seeing the

content

on the

internet

, it will impact the safety environment in the region. The criminal rate will increase and it is harder for the

government

to handle it.

Hence

, it is better to mitigate the issue by

control

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controlling

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the information first before

spread

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spreading

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it to the public. By controlling the

content

or the information in the public, the

government

can choose which information that safe for public consumption and which one is not.

This

act

also

will help to reduce the fake news that

spread

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spreads

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among the

people

to avoid any conflict of interest.

To sum up

, lots of the

content

on the

internet

starting to out of

the

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apply

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line.

Therefore

, it is an effective solution for the

government

to solve

this

problem by controlling the

medias

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media

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to avoid any future conflict among the

people

.