Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the advancement of technology, lately

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numerous

harmful

content

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has been

spread

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on the

internet

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. Not a few

people

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argue that the only solution to handle

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issue is for the

government

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to

control

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by

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censoring the

content

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of websites. I concur with the opinion since the

government

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have the authority to

control

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the

content

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that

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spread

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among the

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citizens

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on the

internet

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. It cannot be denied that the harmful

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on the

internet

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has

increase

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significantly over the years. If the

government

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could not

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handle it immediately,

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definitely will

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a negative influence

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the

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, especially

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generations. Nowadays, many young

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already

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being exposed

by

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the

internet

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. We cannot

control

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other

people

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on what

content

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they prefer to watch daily.

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, if numerous

people

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getting

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exposed

by

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the harmful

content

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, it is either will

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them or influence them to do what they see on the

internet

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. As mentioned earlier, if individuals get the idea to do the harmful act after seeing the

content

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on the

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, it will impact the safety environment in the region. The criminal rate will increase and it is harder for the

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to handle it.

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, it is better to mitigate the issue by

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control

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the information first before

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spread

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it to the public. By controlling the

content

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or the information in the public, the

government

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can choose which information that safe for public consumption and which one is not.

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act

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will help to reduce the fake news that

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spread

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among the

people

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to avoid any conflict of interest.

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, lots of the

content

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on the

internet

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starting to out of

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apply

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line.

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, it is an effective solution for the

government

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to solve

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problem by controlling the

medias

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media

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to avoid any future conflict among the

people

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.