The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time
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The bar chart compares the participation of
female
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and men in
further
education from 1970 to 1991, breaking down the data into two main categories for each gender: full-time and part-time education.
Overall
, there was a meaningful
increase
in the total of women who studied part-time between 1970 and 1991, in the same way, there was an
increase
substantially in
female
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who studied full-time from 1970 to 1981. But, for both genders, the highest value of students remains in those who studied part-time. In 1980, the number of British men who studied part-time decreased slightly from 1000 thousand to almost 800,
while
, in the three periods there was a gradual and consistent
increase
in the total of those who were in full-time courses reaching above 200 thousand. The lowest total of students was reached in 1970 by
female
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who studied full-time and for the next period there was a sharp
increase
,
however
, in the
last
one there was no significant variance,
then
, the total of students remained close to 200 thousand.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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