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The table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 on one area of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and chart show how it was distributed.

The table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 on one area of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and chart show how it was distributed.
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The charts present the proportion of distributions of police budgets in one area of Britain in 2017 and 2018 and the table shows where the money came from.
Overall
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, The budgets were higher in 2018 which was increased than in 2017,
Therefore
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, as the budgets, the distributions increased as well.
Furthermore
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, the
Budget
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 from the National government was increased from 175,5m in 2017 to 177.8m in 2018. Local taxes were given 91.2m in 2017 and reached 102.3m in 2018.
Then
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, for the other sources, the government got 38m in 2017 and it gave 38.5m in 2018.
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, the distribution of the
budget
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 was higher in officer and staff salaries at 75% in 2017 and at 69% in 2018. For buildings and transport the percentages are the same in 2017 and in 2018 , but actually, the amount of the
budget
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 distribution has risen. and the
last
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, the
budget
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 for technology in 2017 at 8% resurged to 14% in 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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