In the past, most people lived in the countryside and worked in farming. Some people believe that this was a better way of life than the way most people live today. To what extent do you agree or disagree
There is no denying the fact that farming is
foundation
for any society, Add an article
the foundation
while
it is commonly
held belief that living in a suburban area is better than living in an urban area, particularly Correct article usage
a commonly
live
today. there is Verb problem
apply
also
an argument that opposes it, in my opinion, I believe that living in cities is more convenient and provide
Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
people
with more opportunities to develop and enhance their life
than the
countryside.
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in the
To begin
with, previously people
's lives were not demanding, there were fewer requirements. In other words
, people
's needs were limited to certain things such
as safety, food, and marriage. In addition
, there
were able to fulfil those needs within farming communities in rural Correct pronoun usage
they
areas
, the quality of life
was simple and not sophisticated, this
reason why currently Correct pronoun usage
which
people
might
prefer staying in rural Verb problem
apply
areas
.
Another point to consider, today's technology and advancements in various aspects of life
have allowed for many improvements in quality of living that were not available in the past. It is also
worth noting that, the present offers a considerable probability of achieve
a better Change the verb form
achieving
life
. furthermore
, the possibility for personal growth and professional development is higher. For instance
, the opportunities in large cities or urban areas
,
can secure a superior future by means of well-paying jobs.
In conclusion, despite Remove the comma
apply
people
having different views, I firmly believe that the quality of living in modern society is greater than staying in rural areas
where the stress is much lower, but unfortunately the
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apply
life
to some extent is limited, especially regarding entertainment and building fortune.Submitted by dr.mda15 on
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