In the modern world, people no longer need to use food or products from animals, such as medicine and clothing. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

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In the upcoming decades, the development of modern technologies might reduce the
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, which are being used for producing people’s needs,
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as meals, medicines, and clothing. I partially agree with
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opinion, and in the essay below, I will provide certain information, regarding the importance, and unnecessariness of using beasts in
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lives. To begin with,
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of vegetarians, scientists have been searching for new alternative ways to replace animal-made products. Most of them contain nutrients and carbohydrates, similar to naturally produced foods, and have no difference in taste.
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, meals
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as alternative dairy foods, meat and sausages are free to access in every market, and every volunteer is able to buy them in case he wants to cheer
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move.
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,
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herbal products are much higher in cost than animal-made nutrition.
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, in our country,
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milk
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costs triple the price of organic cow milk, and even if in the future the amount of
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used for producing foods will reduce, certain social groups would not be able to buy bio-friendly dishes. Since ancient years, humans
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beasts to get some fur and make clothing like jackets, trousers and so on.
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, for today we have plenty of materials that can be as warm and qualified as rabbit wool or crocodile skin,
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cheaper and long-lasting.
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, in comparison to ship, which can grow its wool more than once, rabbits will die
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procedure, and in certain places of the world,
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, Australia,
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kind of business, the
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of rabbits had an extremely deep fall in population. In the medical industry, mostly tiny beasts are being used in experiments, and ought to die, even if the bacteria testing exists.
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, in my opinion in certain spheres like cosmetics or clothing production,
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of
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must be diminished, owing to the fact, that they directly negatively influence their population. Even though, it is impossible to fully eradicate the usage of
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, by
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of economic and specific geographical locations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable
  • ethical alternatives
  • global demand
  • genetic engineering
  • synthetic biology
  • plant-based diets
  • environmental footprint
  • veganism
  • biotechnology
  • cultural sensitivity
  • economic viability
  • lab-grown meat
  • synthetic materials
  • global infrastructure
  • consumer habits
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