You want to sell your mobile phone. You think a friend of yours might be interested to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling your mobile phone. Describe the mobile phone. Suggest the mode of payment to your friend

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Dear John, I am writing

this

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letter to tell you about the mobile phone that I want to sell. I am sure that you are more inclined

in getting

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to get

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iphone

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iPhone

. The reason behind selling is that

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the iphone

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iphone

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iPhone

has only

sim

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a sim

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card which makes it very handle my volume of transactions.

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Moreover

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I feel

android

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Android

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is much better than

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the iphone

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iphone

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iPhone

in a lot of aspects. I have

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iphone

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iPhone

pro

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Pro

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. It has 128

Gb ram

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GB RAM

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and has excellent camera and video functioning. It is in a brand new condition . I

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have been

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using

this

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phone

from

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for

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last

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the last

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4 years and till now the battery is

also

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heatlhy

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healthy

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Furthermore

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it has good storage capacity too. I would really appreciate

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it if

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you could please transfer the payment to my bank account as it is very easy to make the transactions by

mrans

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means

of debit or credit cards . I will look forward to

hear

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hearing

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from you. Yours friendly, Harshalika Singh

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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