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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear
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, My name is Laura Thomas and I am
fourty-years-old
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forty years old
. I am writing to make my contribution to the column in your magazine
that is
 published every Sunday called "the
book
 that influenced me the most". I would like to describe my impressions
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 the
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 of
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highly
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". To start with,
this
 bibliography not only made a great impact
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 the world.
Firstly
, the change of habits that its author aims to,
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 ordinary tasks that had no real importance.
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 the most important tasks of the day, in order to establish a hierarchy in our routine, avoiding spending time
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 others that may be irrelevant but demand from us heaps of energy.
Secondly
,
this
book
, in a simple but clear and direct
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, explains step by step how to expand those technics to other more
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 but essential aspects of our lives.
For instance
, the practice of paying attention and giving importance to the relations that
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 is another valuable taught
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. Summarising, I would like to strongly recommend
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reading
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this
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 to any person who deserves to achieve significant goals in their lives, in order to enhance their
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. Best regards, Laura
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