Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the enviroment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays a large proportion of native woods and
forest
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are being destroyed worldwide. From the rainforest in Africa to the vast jungle in the Amazonas in South America, the indiscriminate damage caused by human action has no
paralel
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parallel
with ancient times,
where
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when
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our ancestors used to exploit those resources for a living. In
this
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I will
analise
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analyse
this
phenomenom
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phenomenon
and I will suggest some steps that should be taken. To start with, It is
well-kown
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well-known
that, as I stated above, the
substraction
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subtraction
of natural resources by humans has always been a normal activity that allowed our generations to grow and
develope
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develop
themselves.
Nonetheless
, with the irruption of the first industrial revolution, those procedures became massive, and no focus on the impact of those activities on our
plantet
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planet
were
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considered.
For example
, with the invention of the wheel, the speed
in
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of
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the collection of wood and other natural materials grew exponentially.
On the contrary
, the incipient but visible side effects of the introduction of new technologies called little attention to the public and the authorities.
Secondly
, in the following era, where the negative effects on the
environment
derived
of
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the
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indiscriminated
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indiscriminate
indiscriminately
human activity
became
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to
arouse
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, many governments looked apart
due to
the
fact
that the revenues of the industries which profited
of
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those activities were
billionaire
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billionaires
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.
Consequently
, regulations were generally loose,
due to
the
fact
that the taxes the administrations
recieved
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received
where
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overwhelming high.
Nonetheless
, some countries changed their perspective and started to
imposse
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impose
high taxes
to
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on
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indiscriminate deforestation, in order to preserve not only the
environment
but the flora and fauna
who
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that
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inhabits
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inhabit
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those areas. In
adition
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addition
, many lands were protected and, in a major action, the
Uninted
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United
Nations named some lands as part of the patrimony of
the
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humanity.
Besides
the
fact
that these measures may be effective, some
aditional
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additional
steps should be taken in order to preserve our forest. A good way of
protect
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protecting
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our
environment
could be to prevent new
goverments
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governments
government
in office
to change
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legislation that was made by prior administrations. What is more, I strongly believe that laws related to the protection of the forest and the
environment
should be, in general,
constitutionally-bonded
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. In conclusion, despite the
fact
that many actions have been already taken by governments in
oder
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order
to avoid deforestation caused by human activity,
further
measures can be applied in order to preserve our green areas and avoid our jungles, woods, rainforest, and
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animals and plants who live in those ecosystems, from being extincted.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • sustainable
  • eco-friendly
  • indigenous communities
  • logging regulations
  • land use management
  • public awareness
  • international cooperation
  • biodiversity loss
  • carbon footprint
  • habitat destruction
  • renewable resources
  • environmental preservation
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