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Nowadays it is very popular to be technology/internet literate. Some people say that these skills will replace the use of books as main source of information and entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

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No doubt that in present-day technology plays an important role in our lives and many folks rely on the
Internet
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. It argued that technology will replace
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 for search information and for enjoyment. I assert that the
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 will be the most dominant than handbooks. In
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 essay, I will present my reasons and draw a logical conclusion. Most people prefer to use the
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 rather than
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 for many reasons. First and foremost, it is easy to find whatever they want quickly
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 it is hard and takes a lot of time to find data from
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 the
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 saves time.
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, the
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 is more attractive than
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 it has many apps like games, learning apps,and for purchasing some things which are more interesting to people than
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. Despite all the benefits of
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, some people prefer
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 rather than the
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 because they want to touch the materials and they focus more when they touch the
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, they believe that
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 are cheaper than the
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. In conclusion,
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internet
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 plays a vital role in our lives and it makes our lives easier. I,
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, assert that the
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 is preferable to
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 because of saves time has a lot of information and is more attractive than
books
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.
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