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A company has asked for permission from the local Council to built a factory in your area. Write a letter to the local Council stating that you and your neighbours think this is a bad idea. State what problem this might cause Explain where the factory should be constructed Explain what you want the Council to Do

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Dear Sir or Madam, As a resident of Brampton. I am writing to you in regard
of
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 building a factory idea in our
area
.
While
, I and my neighbours
are not satisfy
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 with
this
 idea.
Firstly
, if
new
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the new
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 factory is going to
built
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 in our
area
,
this
 will
put
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a deterimental
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deterimental
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detrimental
 impact on
environment
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. As there are
lot
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 of trees in our
area
 which will be cut down, that leads to deforestation.
Moreover
,
factory
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 will produce smoke
that is
 not good for
health
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 of individuals.
Hence
,
this
 would create
issue
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 in inhaling the oxygen. As a solution, I would suggest
to construct
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 the building far away from
community
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the community
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area
,
for example
,
nearby
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near
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countryside
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the countryside
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. So, it will be helpful for people and
environment
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 too. Thank you for considering my request. I am waiting for your reply.
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Your
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 faithfully, Suman
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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