WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the estimated percentages of the world among
males
and females
across six regions for the last
year.
Overall
, South Asia
has the highest illiteracy
rate as compared to other countries
, while
developed countries
have the lowest illiteracy
rate among all countries
. In addition
, most women in the Arab States and South Asia
were illiterate.
According to
the graph, in developed countries
, Caribbean and East Asia
, males
and females
have illiteracy
rates of approximately 1% and around 2%, 10% and slightly above 10%, approximately 8% and 20%, respectively.
In the remaining three countries
, Africa, Arab States, and South Asia
, males
and females
represented the illiteracy
rates of just above 30% and around 58%, slightly below 30% and just above 50%, around 33% and approximately 55%, respectively. In comparison, South Asia
females
have the highest percentage of illiteracy
among males
and females
of all countries
, while
developed countries
have a negligible number of illiterate males
.Submitted by mahmushtaq on
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