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The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph above illustrates the annual
number
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 of films that were sold or rented between 2002 and 2011 in an unnamed store. The charts show the information
of
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on
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 rental films, VHS,
DVD
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 and Blu-ray
sales
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.
To begin
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 with, rentals were the most popular deals in 2002 by the
number
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 of around 185000, followed by VHS and
DVD
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sales
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 respectively. It can be seen that during the period, rentals declined slowly and by 2011 there were only about 60000 rental trades. VHS
sales
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also
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droped
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dropped
 in
number
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 and in 2006, they completely disappeared.
On the other hand
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,
DVD
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sales
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 rose
dramaticly
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dramatically
 between 2002 and 2007, reaching the
number
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 of 212000 in 2007 (from just under 50000
in
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at
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 the
begining
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beginning
 of the period), it went from the least preferable option to the most.
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, after 2007, the amount of
DVD
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sales
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 started to fall slightly, but it was still the most popular one among all others.
To sum up
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, until 2006 there were no Blu-ray
sales
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 present and they first
apeared
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appeared
 in 2007. In detail,
also
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 the
sales
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 numbers were low in 2007 (under 5000), they slowly rose each year and
finally
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 passed 10000
sales
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 in the end.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, dvd, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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