The map below shows a site in Norbiton and its future plan.

The map below shows a site in Norbiton and its future plan.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows a site in Norbiton and its future plan.
The maps illustrate an industrial
site
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in Norbiton city
,
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and the plan of its future developed form.
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, The current industrial spaces
in
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on
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the
site
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,
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will be converted
to
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into
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a residential
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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.
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, The needed facilities will be established near to houses,
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there will be accessibility to farmland by a bridge. There will be a complete change of function in the
site
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, All the factories present in the area, will be wiped out and substituted by houses. Places that are required in a residential space,
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as shops and medical
center
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centers
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will have been constructed around the main square in the middle of the
site
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.
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Also
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Also,
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there will be a school on the right side of the shown area. Another huge difference is that a bridge will be built across the river to give access to the farmland.
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path will reach a new house area on the northern side of the
site
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. Below the river, on the east part, through the main square, a playground and school will be set up respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words site with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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