The chart below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 to 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar charts illustrate the number of marriages and divorces in America during the period of 30 years and the marital status of elderly citizens in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, it is clear from the figure that, in 1970, the Linking Words
amount
of marriages was significantly high at 2.5 Change the quantifier
number
million
, Use synonyms
while
the index of divorces was the lowest, representing 1 Linking Words
million
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the highest percentage of married adults was 70% in 1970, Linking Words
whereas
the indicator of divorced Americans was only approximately 3% during that year.
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According to
the statistics of the first bar graph, the marriage rate in 1970 and Linking Words
in
1980 remained steady at 2.5 Change preposition
apply
million
people. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
indicator decreased slightly to 2 Linking Words
million
in 2000. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the maximum number of divorces in the USA was almost 1.5 Linking Words
million
in the year 1980, Use synonyms
while
the rate diminished to 0.3 Linking Words
million
after the period of 10 years. The lowest divorce number was recorded in 1970 and 2000, estimating 1 Use synonyms
million
Americans.Use synonyms
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