The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is common knowledge that fuels

arr

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very harmful to the blue planet and its ecosystem, to limit these impacts, some would suggest

to raise

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raising

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its

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their

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price. I

personnally

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personally

disagree and the following essay will explain why.

Above all

, the

fuel

industry is a

billion dollars

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billion-dollar

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industry,

many

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and many

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countries

relay

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rely

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and

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depend on it. The economy of many cities

depend

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depends

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on it,

therefore

creating countless jobs and keeping many roofs over many

families

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families'

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heads. The cost of

fuel

has already been raised by many

governements

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governments

, in an effort to lower its use,

unfortunetly

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unfortunately

that only led to an increase in the prices of basic elements like fresh produce and transportation making the

costumer

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customer

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a victim in the absence of any other option. I do agree that for many years and throughout many studies, scientists made it a point to display how destructive the

fuel

can be to not only the environment

,

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but

also

to the

wild life

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wildlife

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, on land and in the sea. We have witnessed countless oil

spills

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spill

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accidents with dead animals on the shore, which

make

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makes

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us reflect

of

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on

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the safety measures for oil transportation. All in all,

instead

of increasing the price of

the

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apply

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fuel

,

i

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would rather suggest offering better

alternative

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alternatives

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and investing more in the

developpement

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development

of electric cars or renewable energies,

in addition

to making them more affordable

thus

solving both the economic and

environemental

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environmental

issues.