The graph send below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with a predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line chart provides key information about the rate of population in four countries living in
city
. The units are measured in percentage.
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the city
a city
Overall
, is clear from the graph that all nations are close to each other in per cent. In addition
, we saw that Philippines
started with a fixed per sent from 1970 to 1980 and Correct article usage
the Philippines
then
it was a
sharp, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
Malaysia started with an increase significantly from the first year.
According to
what is shown the Philippins
during the years increased significantly, but Correct your spelling
Philippines
amoung
1990 and 2010 dropped slightly. Thailand started with a sharp but the figure remained stable between 1990 and 2020.
In terms of Indonesia every year there was a sharp fall in percentage. But Correct your spelling
among
other
countries there were a sharp and gradual during the year. The graph shows that many people prefer to live in a city more than the countryside.Change preposition
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