In many countries around the world, shopping has turned into a form of entertainment rather than a way of getting what people need. Discuss the reason for this trend. Is it a positive or negative development?

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as

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entertainment activity

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of what

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actually

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in their daily lives. In my perspective,

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trend leads to negative development which

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caution

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in the following

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paragraphs

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cause

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is

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that

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hectic lifestyle of many

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,

people

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have to spend longer hours at their workplace to earn more

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and to complete their all

neccessities

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necessities

, which can

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anxiety among users owing to

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busy routine.

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, to minimise their stress level,

people

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started to see shopping as a recreational activity, which can

helps

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to provide their

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level of satisfaction by utilizing their

hard earned

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income.

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, whenever,

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feel any kind of work regarding stress, doing some shopping

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as

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magic for me.

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, wastage of

money

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has been seen as a main factor

of

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shopping , which

individuals

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been spending just to enjoy their

lesiure

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leisure

time. In fact, if

people

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focus on their requirements before spending ,

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they will

able

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to save that

money

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in other sectors involving

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education, future

saving

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,

buying

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and buying

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home

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a home

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.

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,

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these days

, many young generations

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been switching their old phones with new ones

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installments

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, just to show others including friends , whenever "Apple Company" introduces. In conclusion,

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, shopping has

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aim

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for

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relaxing

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for many

individuals

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,

but

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their drawbacks including wastage of

money

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cannot be

inevitabled

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inevitable

. It is recommended that

individuals

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should do some other outdoor

activites

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activities

to spend their free time and relax their

mind

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rather than doing shopping as a recreational task.