The line graph illustrate total crime arrests per persons under 18 by locality, 1995 and 1995. Summarize and make comparison where relavent.
The given line graph illustrates the youth
crime
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rate
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of
suburban, urban and rural Change preposition
in
areas
from the Use synonyms
year
1995 to 1998.
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Overall
, throughout the period, the Linking Words
crime
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rate
in Use synonyms
suburben
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suburban
areas
experienced a sharp increase, Use synonyms
then
a sharp decrease. and Linking Words
then
, another rise. Linking Words
Moreover
, in rural and urban Linking Words
areas
, the Use synonyms
crime
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rate
experienced a gradual decline.
The juvenile Use synonyms
crime
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rate
in suburban Use synonyms
areas
was around 2% in 1995. After that, it increased sharply and reached approximately 8% in 1996. The next Use synonyms
year
, in 1997, it declined rapidly and reached around -2%. In 1998, the Use synonyms
crime
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rate
in Use synonyms
subarban
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suburban
areas
reached 0%.
In 1995, the youth Use synonyms
crime
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rate
was around 3% in rural Use synonyms
areas
, and it rose slightly and reached around 4% in the next Use synonyms
year
, 1997. Use synonyms
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, it started declining and reached roughly -2%. Meanwhile, in urban Linking Words
areas
, the Use synonyms
crime
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rate
was approximately 1% in 1995, and with a slight Use synonyms
rise
it reached nearly 2%. In the Add a comma
rise,
year
1998, the Use synonyms
crime
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rate
in urban Use synonyms
areas
experienced a gradual decrease and reached roughly Use synonyms
-
4%.Change preposition
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