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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables depict the number of
students
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 participating in exchange programs between universities in Europe and Australia from the years 2007 and 2009.
Overall
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, the total number of European
students
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 studying in Australia was higher than that of Australian
students
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 studying
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 Europe, with the former showing an increase,
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 the latter showed the same rate over two years. Regarding the first table, the total of European countries population who studying in Australia climbed from 189 to 226. Despite
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 rise, certain countries
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 as the UK and France recorded a minor decline, dropping from 31 and 61 to 26 and 60, respectively. As for the second picture, Australian
students
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 who were exchanged to France recorded the highest number of 58 in 2009
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 and
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 led slightly at 37 in 2007.
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 was followed by those in Germany, with an eight increase over two years.
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, the population of the three remaining countries experienced a decrease to 14 and 6 in the Netherlands and Sweden,
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 that of the UK decreased to the lowest figure at 6 people in 2009.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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