Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumers. Some people believe we should buy food from local farmers to protect the environment and help the local business. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Food

is the basic necessity of life for everyone.

Consumers

from different countries buy

food

from local alternatives but some people think that

food

buy

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bought

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from local

farmers

help

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helps

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to grow local

business

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businesses

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and protect the environment.

This

essay

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essay's

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benefits outweigh the drawbacks, some

consumers

have limited

land

to grow

food

but organic

food

grown by local

farmers

is really healthier. The drawbacks for

consumers

who buy

food

from

farm

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farms

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. The reason is that

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apply

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some

consumers

have

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do have

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not enough

land

because to grow any

food

consumers

need more

land

to cultivate any

food

as well as

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, imported

food

is not fresh because people use some chemicals so it would stay

long

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a long

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time approximately six months.

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UAE

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the UAE

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that

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country which is not growing any

food

beacuse

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because

they

have

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do have

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not sufficient

land

and weather conditions

also

not good to grow any

food

. The biggest merit is that organic

food

is healthy and pure because it is produced without any chemical ingredients and it is

also

good for cultivated soil, which

protect

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protects

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the environment.

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, a lot of children in every nation are suffering from stomach

allergy

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allergies

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and in

this

condition,

doctor

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the doctor

a doctor

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suggests

patient

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patients

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apply

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eat organic

food

because some

food

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foods

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grow

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are grown

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with

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chemicals which is not good for children even

everybody

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everybody's

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health. Another benefit is that

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apply

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organic

food

is a good source of income for local

farmers

but it is cheaper than that

food

which

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apply

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is grow

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is growing

is grown

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with the help of chemicals. In conclusion, organic

food

is pure and healthy in every condition and it

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is also earned

is also earning

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also

earn source for local

farmers

this

is the main

benefits

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benefit

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, even

some

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though some

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conumers

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consumers

have not sufficient

land

to cultivate

food

and imported

food

is not fresh

food

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Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumers. Some people believe we should buy food from local farmers to protect the environment and help the local business. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Your opinion

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