The table shows information on consumer spending on different iteams in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the main features and make ocmparison where relavent.
The given table illustrates information on the expenditures of consumers on different items in 2002 in five different
countries
, Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey
.
Overall
, all countries
spent on food
, drinks
and tobacco
the most and comparatively less on clothing and footwear and leisure
and education
. Turkey
spent the highest on food
, drinks
and
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apply
tobacco
and leisure
and education
among all countries
, while
Sweden spent the lowest on food
, drink and tobacco
. Meanwhile, Italy spent the highest on clothing and footwear and Spain spent the lowest on leisure
and education
.
For food
, drinks
and tobacco
, Turkey
spent 32.14% which was the highest among all countries
. Moreover
, Turkey
also
spent the highest on leisure
and education
which was 4.35%. Spain, while
spending 18.80 % on food
, drinks
and tobacco
, spent the lowest on leisure
and education
which was only 1.98%. Italy, on the other hand
, spent the highest on clothing and footwear among all countries
which was 9.00%.
Furthermore
, Ireland,
spent 28.91% on Remove the comma
apply
food
, drinks
and tobacco
and 2.21% on leisure
and education
. Sweden spent the lowest on food
, drink and tobacco
among all countries
and the percentage was 15.77.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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