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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while other believe that it is better to straight after school. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

#people #university #college #route #career #school
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 my opinion university can be a great
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, you can find people there and
building
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relationship
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they
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help you with your future and studying at
university
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a university
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 gives you
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experience
experince
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experience
 and the degree to find a job The skills or knowledge from studying and a lot of jobs
needs
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 experience or particular skills Starting
business
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 after school
it
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can be a little bit hard and expensive but if you
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good
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 place and you already have ideas about your
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many young people
started
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the business
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business
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 after school
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 work earlier can lead you to
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 place in the
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 future In the end whatever chose what path you want and what your goal and for
me
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I see going to college
is
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 the best route some people see it
is
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 the longest route that's
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why
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way
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why
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 they prefer to start
business
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a business
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 after school
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