As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems

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to young adults. As major cities around the world have developed significantly, more and more young people, leading to several problems in society which

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. Urban centers are expanding has led to many problems. Foremost among these is junior employees may gain the pressure to obtain a job. The fast-growing economic development of major cities and higher

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attract many workers from different parts of

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country.

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, the job market has become highly competitive and young workers confronting adversities to achieve a good-payment occupation.

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, the pressure to

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a job may cause a mental health problem

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young employees

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as depression, anxiety and stress.

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, it is undeniable that the

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and meal allowance.

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, the high living cost in urban areas might lead to cause

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financial distress for the young city dwellers with a limited monthly salary.

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, there are clear solutions for young adults, should governments want to follow them.

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, the government should expand

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and decline

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for workers in rural

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to live in their hometown. Another

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is that

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financial literacy

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a crucial role in empowering individuals, they should

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financial knowledge during college to prepare adolescents for real-world challenges. In conclusion,

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from living in cities are apparent, these are problems with clear

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, should governments want to try them. In my opinion, if people continue to ignore young people who

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in town, the repercussions

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the rapid growth of large metropolises are going to be long-lasting and disastrous.