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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

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Global warming is one of the most serious problems in the 21st century. It causes many issues, and one of the biggest is the rise in
sea
 levels.
This
 happens because the ice at the poles is melted, and the oceans are getting warmer. The following essay will discuss the threats
that
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associated
to
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 Global warming and possible
solutions
 for these issues.
First,
rising
sea
 levels cause
tsunami
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tsunamis
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 or powerful waves, which can flood
coast
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the coast
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, where some individuals live near the
sea
, and their houses and towns are at risk. Some small islands might even completely disappear. It means that people will have to leave their homes and move to safer places for themselves.
Second,
it damages nature, as many creatures that live near the coast are in danger.
For instance
, in
a
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recent research from Boston University; students show that some per cent of coral reefs in
Atlantic
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the Atlantic
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sea
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 were destroyed.
This
 would affect the ecosystem.
On the other hand
, there are ways to solve these problems, and one of the
solutions
 is to reduce pollution. We can use clean energy, like solar power,
instead
 of coal or oil burning.
This
 way will help slow down the global warming.
Moreover
, there is the solution is to protect coastal areas.
For example
, the
last
 time, the individuals
build
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 barriers to stop water from flooding towns. In conclusion, rising
sea
 levels are a big problem, but there are
solutions
, which scientists advise for humans nowadays.
Moreover
, these
solutions
 may help humanity to improve
state
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 of
environment
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the environment
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 in the world.
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