The diagram below illustrates how recycled paper is made.

The diagram below illustrates how recycled paper is made.
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The diagram shows the process of making recycled
paper
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.
Overall
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, there are four main stages in a
paper
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production, starting with making
pulp
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and ending with making
paper
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.
To begin
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with, in the first stage, old and used
paper
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is directed to mix with water chemicals via a conveyor belt to make an unfiltered
pulp
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.
This
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pulp
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is
then
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filtered in a special filter technique which
as a result
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produces filtered
pulp
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. Afterwards,
at the end
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of the filtering phase, the
pulp
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is directed to a particular barrel which contains water and soap in it to clean. Air is pressured by the bottom of
this
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barrel in order to get rid of ink.
Next,
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filtered
pulp
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is addressed to a box of water and chemicals which is the final step of cleaning. In the subsequent section, cleaned
pulp
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is put into the conveyor belt and rolled by heated rollers and recycled
paper
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will be ready
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, pulp with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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