The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrated information about the
number
of three countries (Greece,Denmark, and Canada) ,and the world average who used the internet from 1998 to 2013.
Overall
,
it is clear that
, all community showed an upward trend .
Although
all countries
initially
had a lower rate outraced all countries
at the end
of the period. We can see ,in Denmark increased sharply starting in 1998 the
number
arrived at 21,000 after in 2003 grew up to 57,000 in 2003 reached 95,000 .
In addition
, Canada started start 22,000 and increased to 85,000 in 2013. Greece was the lowest country started 2000 and after 5 years increased to 23,000 in the end the period arrived at 62,000 . The world average the
number
who used the internet in 1998 it 3000 increased sharply after that in 2013 get the
number
35000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Internet penetration
  • Trend
  • Growth rate
  • Increase/decrease
  • Comparative analysis
  • Significant
  • Average
  • Fluctuation
  • Plateau
  • Surge
  • Spike
  • Decline
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