The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart and table show the origins of travellers (Asia, Europe, US, and Other),
their
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average length of their stay, and their
preffered
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preferred
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
and activities at a specific holiday resort in Australia.
Overall
,
Asians
make up the largest group of
visitors
, though crowds from Europe stay the longest. All four regions
has
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distinct preferences, with
Asians
and
Americans
favor
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favouring
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hotels and sightseeing,
while
Europeans
and other
visitors
prefer campsites and water-related activities. It can be seen that Asian travellers account for 37% of
visitors
, followed closely by
Europeans
at 35%.
Americans
make up 18%,
while
visitors
from other regions comprise only 10%.
Although
Asians
are the most frequent
visitors
, they stay at an average of 7
days
, compared to
Europeans
at 16
days
,
Americans
at 14
days
, and other
visitors
at 10
days
. In terms of
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
,
Europeans
and other travellers prefer camping or caravans,
while
Asians
choose 5-star hotels and American opt for 4-star hotels. For activities, sightseeing is most popular among
Asians
and
Americans
,
while
Europeans
enjoy sunbathing or swimming. Other
visitors
are keen
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surfing.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words asians, visitors, americans, europeans, days with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • comparison
  • spike
  • drop
  • correlation
  • seasonal variation
  • demographics
  • tourist influx
  • resort
  • holidaymakers
  • visitor statistics
  • notable changes
  • fluctuation
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • peak season
  • off-peak season
  • international tourists
  • domestic tourists
  • external factors
  • economic conditions
  • political climate
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