The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart and table show the origins of travellers (Asia, Europe, US, and Other),
their
average length of their stay, and their Change the pronoun
the
preffered
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preferred
accomodations
and activities at a specific holiday resort in Australia.
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accommodations
accommodation
Overall
, Asians
make up the largest group of visitors
, though crowds from Europe stay the longest. All four regions has
distinct preferences, with Change the verb form
have
Asians
and Americans
favor
hotels and sightseeing, Wrong verb form
favouring
while
Europeans
and other visitors
prefer campsites and water-related activities.
It can be seen that Asian travellers account for 37% of visitors
, followed closely by Europeans
at 35%. Americans
make up 18%, while
visitors
from other regions comprise only 10%. Although
Asians
are the most frequent visitors
, they stay at an average of 7 days
, compared to Europeans
at 16 days
, Americans
at 14 days
, and other visitors
at 10 days
.
In terms of accomodations
, Correct your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
Europeans
and other travellers prefer camping or caravans, while
Asians
choose 5-star hotels and American opt for 4-star hotels. For activities, sightseeing is most popular among Asians
and Americans
, while
Europeans
enjoy sunbathing or swimming. Other visitors
are keen with
surfing.Change preposition
on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words asians, visitors, americans, europeans, days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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