Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternatives medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor . Do you think this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples form you knowledge or experience.

Healthcare

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The healthcare

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sector has become a way to generate income. In today's world, plenty of

people

are avoiding

to visit

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visiting

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hospitals and are trying

the

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apply

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more alternative

form

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forms

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of

medicine

.

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essay will discuss the rise of

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trend in detail and will explain why

this

is a positive development. Visiting healthcare centres is exorbitant and

hence

, unaffordable for some individuals. As many of them do not have health insurance so, it becomes

formidable

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difficult

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for them to get these expensive treatments.

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, doctors prescribe plenty of medicines for minor illnesses

such

as

cough

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coughs

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and

cold

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colds

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which can be treated at home.

Furthermore

, the

monoply

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monopoly

of

pharmacuetical

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pharmaceutical

companies

make

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the credibility of

halthcare

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healthcare

health care

providers questionable. They prescribe the company's

medicine

in exchange

of

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favours

for example

, many pharma companies pay millions of dollars and foreign trips to doctors so, they will prescribe their company's

medicine

. Many

people

, myself included, believe that

this

is a positive trend. Alternatives

such

as

homeopathic

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homoeopathic

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medicine

has

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gained a lot of prestige and

is

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are

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considered authentic by many users. It saves them from getting

in

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into

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debt and

save

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their health insurance as well.

However

,

this

is only for minor issues, major issues should be treated with attention.

Moreover

, with the rise of

internet

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the internet

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, now

people

are capable

to treat

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of treating

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minor ailments at home. It has brought the

revoluton

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revolution

in the healthcare sector. In conclusion, visiting doctors can be costly so,

people

are avoiding it and are now discovering more alternative forms of medicines, which can be beneficial for them.