There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports center that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports center. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last time you complained explain what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern about
dressing
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rooms in the health club
that
is frequently visit
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.
Firstly
, there are basically four changing rooms in
a
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one small hall and the locks of
doors
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the doors
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are not working properly.
Therefore
, when I go to change my clothes I feel uncomfortable because other people are
also
there.
Furthermore
, the odour is
very
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so
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bad that a person cannot even stand in the changing room,
this
is
since
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because
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some people do not pick
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up there
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there
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their
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changed clothes from the floor.
However
, previously I complained about
this
matter to senior staff but they said
this
is not their responsibility to check everything.
Also
, I
reach
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to
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out to
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the
sanitantion
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sanitation
supervisor ,
however
, he said he
will
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look into it.
Whereas
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, I
did
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have
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not
see
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any changes yet. As a
solution
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I would suggest that you should conduct
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a meeting
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with your staff, So that they can pay attention to their work. Thank you for considering my request. Yours faithfully, Suman
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph addresses a distinct main idea for better clarity.
task achievement
Include more specific details or examples in your response to fully achieve the task.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens with a polite and clear greeting and closing, which helps maintain a formal tone.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable for a formal letter addressed to a manager.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inadequate
  • unsanitary
  • persistent
  • maintenance
  • rectify
  • detrimental
  • substandard
  • facilities
  • insufficient
  • conducive
  • prompt attention
  • feedback
  • complaint escalation
  • sanitation
  • renovation
  • urgent priority
  • responsive action
  • immediate resolution
  • implement changes
  • customer satisfaction
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