The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph illustrates how many

tourists

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visited three different places in a European country from 1987 to 2007.

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, the number of

visitors

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who visited

to

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the

coast

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steady

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increased from

beginning

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the beginning

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of

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period

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the period

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.

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, the amount of

tourist

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tourists

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visiting the

mountains

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go

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up sharply, a decline observed over the

last

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five years. The

lakes

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were less popular among

of

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tourists

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at the end

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of the

period

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. In 1987, the

cost

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coast

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was the most popular destination with 40,000

visitors

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,

it

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followed by the

mountains

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with 20,000 and the

lakes

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with 10,000

tourists

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. By 2002, the

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tourists

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number of tourists

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who visited

to

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the lake surged dramatically, surpassing both the

coast

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and the

mountains

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at approximately 70,000

visitors

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.

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, after reaching

it

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peak, the

lakes

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saw a significant decline,

dipped

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dipping

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to approximately 50,000

visitors

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in 2007.

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, the amount of

tourist

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tourists

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to the

coast

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was

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apply

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steady rise

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steadily rose

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throughout the

period

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and reached 75,000 by 2007. Meanwhile, the

mountains

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demonstrated

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a gradually

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gradually

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increase and finished the

period

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with 35,000

visitors

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in 2007. In conclusion, the line graph compares different three places: the

coast

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maintained its popularity, the

mountains

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demonstrated

stable

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a stable

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rise,

the

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and the

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lakes

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met

noticeable

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a noticeable

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decline after a boom.