You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● give details of the course ● say how the course would be useful ● explain how the company could help you do this course.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear mister, Recently I saw an online course,that would improve my skills at work.
This
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course contains explicit details about the type of work that I do at the desk
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and some new ideas that will help me to work better and provide more for the company.I would like to ask if the companies resources could help and pay for
this
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training and I will be very grateful
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like I said it would improve me and the
companies
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income With all
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due respect
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, Your coworker Pete

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Consider addressing your manager using their proper title, such as 'Dear Mr. [Last Name]' instead of 'Dear mister'.
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You've provided a clear indication of the course's relevance to your current job.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Training course
  • Useful
  • Manager
  • Details
  • Topics covered
  • Importance
  • Benefits
  • Work
  • Company
  • Help
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