You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● give details of the course ● say how the course would be useful ● explain how the company could help you do this course.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to notify you about
availability
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the availability
training
course that could be useful in our company. The duration of Correct article usage
a training
this
program is three months. The material is divided into sections with relevant information on each topic. Information is presented clearly for any employee.
If necessary, employees will be able to return to the material at any time, even after the expiration of three months. User registration is protected by the site and cannot be hacked. This
program can be used both as training for employees and testing their progress.
This
course represents most ideas of our company, which is why I mentioned it in this
letter. The company could provide resources to obtain information from paid sources, as well providing 15% of sales from each purchase.
Sincerely yours,Bozbei ChirillSubmitted by acaitaz on
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task achievement
The letter could benefit from more specific information about how exactly the course aligns with the company's objectives and the specific benefits it will bring to your role. It's important to highlight how it directly contributes to business goals.
coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas more logically, perhaps by separating the details of the course, the benefits to the company, and how the company can assist in attending into distinct paragraphs.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a clear structure and maintains a professional tone throughout, which is suitable for communication with a manager.
greeting and closing
The closing and greeting are appropriately formal.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite