The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. ▪Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
data chart provides an idea about the amount of times that three applications were downloaded from the World Wide Web across 5 weeks.
Overall
, ActiveX kept a high and steady rate of downloads
, Whilst Net was Fluctuating and Java steadily rising throughout the time frame given.
ActiveX was the most downloaded data Package, starting with around 60 downloads
at 1 and shooting up to more than 80 downloads
on week
2, following that, a steady rate between 80 to 120 in the next 3 weeks.
Java started off at a little over 40 downloads
on week
1,
And kept on steadily raising that number up to a little over 80 Remove the comma
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downloads
on week
5.
Although
Net began with a little under 40 downloads
on week
one, it began to slowly fall down to around 20 downloads
on week
three,
But caught up and started to rise again to over 40 Remove the comma
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downloads
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