The graph given illustrate the used devices in the 18 to 25 age group in canada used to watch television in two different years(2009 and 2018).
The pie charts provide key information about the devices utilized by people in the 18 to 25 age group to watch television in Canada in two different years. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Linking Words
the
conventional TV represented the largest portion Correct article usage
apply
on
the pie in 2009. Change preposition
of
While
, during 2019 Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
smart phones
and Correct your spelling
smartphones
the
flat-screen Correct article usage
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TV
indicated significant figures. Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
In addition
, the ratios of the utilization of these devices Linking Words
were
fluctuated through the interval from 2009 to 2019.
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According to
the data shown, conventional TV accounted for a substantial 34% in 2009, but it plunged to 4% by 2019. Linking Words
Tablet
genre Correct article usage
The tablet
comprised
for 5% in 2009 and it soared to 19%. Verb problem
accounted
Whereas
, Desktop computers remain approximately constant throughout the two mentioned years.
In terms of Linking Words
the
mobile Correct article usage
apply
phone
and flat Fix the agreement mistake
phones
secreen
, it is obvious that Correct your spelling
screen
there
proportions approximately Correct your spelling
their
doubled
by 2019. Wrong verb form
double
On the other hand
, laptops experienced a decrease from 20% in 2009 to 12% in 2019.Linking Words
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