The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
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The maps compare the layout of an office building between now and the
future
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Overall
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, there is a significant difference in the position of facilities in office
building
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buildings
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compared to its
future
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While
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the
grass
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area is expected to disappear, several new facilities are planned to be constructed. Looking at the
map
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in more detail, at the top of the
map
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, the kitchen and canteen are predicted to
converted
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into
by
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apply
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two offices,
while
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the storeroom is anticipated to remain unchanged in the
future
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. Meanwhile, at the bottom of the
map
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, two offices disappeared and are predicted to
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be transformer
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transformer
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transformed
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into
by
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apply
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an entrance, which is located next to the right
grass
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. Regarding the two sides of the
map
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, a lot of new facilities are anticipated to be built in the areas which were used to grow
grass
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. At the right of the
map
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, coffee machines and a meeting area with several chairs will be constructed,
while
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the WCs will be moved to the top corner of the
map
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At
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the opposite side, the
grass
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will be replaced by an outdoor seating area with three chair lines,
while
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the entrance will remain unchanged in the
future
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words future, grass, map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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