Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some people that professionals should serve their country,

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others think that paramedics should not be bound and should

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free. people with the former

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,

individuals

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should deliver their

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to

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public, because they

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learnt everything from from their native country and

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developed specialised skills by working

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these people.

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, the latter one's

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that

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professionals should not be restricted, as they

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spent their own money on their education and if the native region is unable to provide them with excellent employment opportunities,

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they should be allowed to move anywhere in the world. I will explain both points with relevant examples.

To begin

with the former

opinion

,

individuals

in favour of

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that, engineers and consultants should serve

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public. Because they are the assets of their own countries and governments have assisted them

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achieving their current positions.

This

is why they must deliver their

services

to locals. To illustrate, South Africa was facing

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of healthcare workers and citizens were facing issues, so they restricted

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of paramedical teams out of their state, which ultimately filled the vacant seats and their health sector started flourishing.

On the other hand

, the supporters of the latter

opinion

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that

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individuals

should not be bound, they should be allowed to migrate

where ever

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they wish. Because, if the

individuals

did not receive any financial support from the higher officials and the governments are unable to provide the financial security and the basic employment opportunities to the

individuals

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they should not restrict them.

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they should facilitate

these Specialist

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to learn from

first world

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countries

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so that in future, these specialists can be asked to provide their

services

to their own communities.

For instance

, China has introduced

this

policy, in which they give scholarships to their doctors and sign a contract, by which surgeons, return back to

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country after completing their foreign education.

This

is how their health care has marvellous

services

.

To conclude

, both arguments are valid at some points

however

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the professionals must have the freedom to work in any state they want if they have not been receiving the required status,

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if they

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never received any funds or help from their governments.