You are a member of a international students club. The club is organizing an event to celebrate poplar foods around the world. Write a letter to the event organizer, Lucis Offer to make a poplar dish from your country Describe what this dish is Explain why it should be included in event

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter in relation to the event which is organized on July

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10, 2024 at sunset point by our club. It will be fascinating to taste the various popular foods from different nations. I

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want to be a contestant and thinking of presenting the most delicious dish from Punjab, Channa Batura. 99% of Indians are big fans of

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meal. Basically, it consists of white chana mixed with gravy prepared from onions and tomatoes and served with a Batura prepared from all-purpose flour by adding some salt and yeast to make it soft. It is served with some vinegar onions

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some yoghurt to add another star to its flavour. I think it must be included in the event because it is

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eaten food by Indians and the vegetable contains a good quantity of protein which is good for the body.

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, it is a quite comforting food

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, I think most individuals are going to love its perfect combination. I hope you will take it into consideration. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.

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task achievement

While the letter provides a comprehensive description of the dish and its components, there is a minor inconsistency in how the date of the event is presented ("July, 10, 2024" should be "July 10, 2024").

coherence cohesion

Ensuring that each paragraph retains a single clear idea would further enhance clarity. For instance, discussing the health benefits of the dish can be separated from how it is served.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are well-executed, establishing a polite and formal tone.

complete response

The letter effectively describes the dish and makes a clear argument for its inclusion in the event.

logical structure

The logical structure of the letter makes it easy to follow and understand.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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