There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The two maps illustrate the main changes that have taken place in Paradise
Island
in the past and the present. Overall
, the island
has undergone significant changes, today, new infrastructures have been built and a small number of initial features have been upgraded.
In the past, inside the Island
, there was only one building, which was the Scientific Research Station placed on the left corner of the island
near the Boat Pier. On the other hand
, there is a natural spring located on the right side of the island
. Other than that, several floras are scattered in the middle. Whereas
, a natural beach was located at the top of the left corner of the island
, although
it is not permitted to swim there, and there is a rock landscape outside at the top of the right corner.
Conversely
, in the present day, people are allowed to swim on the beach as well as
enjoy the rock scenery in the added lookout area. Moreover
, all of the trees are demolished and new facilities have been added. Firstly
, a hotel complex with a pool facility has replaced the old research area. Secondly
, a restaurant with a BBQ area is set in the middle. Furthermore
, a cafe has been added near the spring, and people can now ride a bicycle on the new cycling path at the bottom of the dining place. Finally
, the pier size is larger than before and the simple boat has developed into a cruise ship.Submitted by bilqissasha on
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